Made life difficult today, as I found that you cannot manipulate carbon pencil like you can charcoal or pastel, and I struggled. Looking at it now, I think his shoulder needs more definition.
This is from a photo of one of our Hertford models. He is always willing to be more adventurous with his posing.
I can't remember what that is in front of him, but it looks like a huge mountain of files, so it gave me the title!
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